Student feedback

We ask two of our class members to watch our thriller opening and tell us what they thought of it. They gave us ideas of how we can improve our thriller opening, we intend  to take these suggestions on board and act on most  of the comment's that were made.

Sound ideas for thriller opening

This is a link to various different sounds that both I and Rayanne like. We intend to incorporate these ideas into our thriller opening.

Evaluation of think like a man poster.

Think like a man poster evaluation from TanishaB

woman in black poster evaluation

Woman in black poster evaluation (1) from TanishaB

Representations of gender roles in thrillers

Representation of gender roles in thrillers from TanishaB

Harris beckenahm girls' toilet from TanishaB

Effects on cannon sx40 hs camera

Media evaluation on the effects that the cannon sx40 hs has from TanishaB

progress of making the production logo

Image of production logo and explanation from TanishaB

kelsey park

Kelsey park pictures and explanation from TanishaB

Filming update

This is a video of Rayanne running, we won't be using this footage as part of the thriller opening because there is several factors that spoil the footage such as:

• A blazer being placed on a radiator which looks out of place.
• Rayanne's hair is in her face which doesn't allow the viewer to see her facial expressions clearly.
• Her clothing is incorrect for the filming.

Teacher feedback

This is our teachers feedback, on our rough cut thriller opening. In this video our teacher talks about the weaknesses and strengths of the rough cut, and what we are able to do in-order to improve the thriller opening.